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With all the types of verbs at your creative disposal (Formulaic Subjunctive, Present Subjunctive, Past Subjunctive, Pluperfect Subjunctive, and more), finding the right subjunctive mood can be tricky. In fact, was and were are often confused. Writer’s Relief has zeroed in on a great way to get you in a subjunctive frame of mind.
Verbs can be expressed in one of three moods:
Indicative Verbs: She picks up litter.
Imperative Verbs: Pick up that litter.
Subjunctive Verbs: If only she were to pick up the litter.
Most of us cringe when we hear “If only I was president of this country…” In the strictest sense, it should be “If only I were president,” using the subjunctive—a mood used to express condition, hypothesis, possibility, speculation, and feelings, rather than actual fact. But often in dialogue, the subjunctive sounds too formal. (Imagine a teenage character saying, “Dude, I wish I were a superhero—that would be awesome!”)
You’re more likely to see “It is imperative that he is present for the meeting” rather than “It is imperative that he be present for the meeting.” The latter uses the subjunctive mood correctly, but it does sound a bit stiff for some writers’ taste. The subjunctive mood has been called “pretentious,” and some claim that it’s dying out in modern literature. Perish the thought! (There’s that subjunctive again!)
If you’re feeling confused, don’t worry. You’re not alone. The declining use of the subjunctive in the English language makes it confusing and difficult to use correctly, but it does have its place, especially in formal written expression.
Some examples of the various forms:
Formulaic Subjunctive Verbs (common expressions)
if it please the court
truth be told
God save the queen
try as you might
be that as it may
Present Subjunctive Verbs
The boss requests that they stop the drilling immediately.
We insist he be appointed at once.
Past Subjunctive Verbs
The boss requested that they stop the drilling immediately.
I wish she weren’t leaving tomorrow.
Pluperfect Subjunctive Verbs
If you hadn’t told me, I would have said the wrong thing.
Future Subjunctive Verbs
If he were to die tomorrow, the inheritance would be mine.
Come tomorrow, that group will be miles away.
More Verb Examples:
The judge recommends that he be put to death.
I wouldn’t do that if I were you.
He recommended that each waitress report her tips.
May the Lord bless you.
I demand that he be taken away at once.
If I should go, will you take care of my cat?
It is important that we donate blood.
He acted as if he were guilty.
I move that the bill be put to a vote.